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Well, well, another haiku writer! Nice to meet you, dear! I wrote about something almost very similar, but more upon the lines of personification. Wanna see? It’s at http://thelunaticsdiary.blogspot.com Reply
Very nice. I hope the poor lamp is soon remembered and given oil. Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/09/30/mag-34/ Reply
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nothing worse than an abandoned lamp. Nicely done.
Forgotten flames… wonderful thought… Well done
Beautiful one..
Much needed!
doomed if I do, doomed if I don’t
True to all parts of world but in india..its never ever forgotten 😉
10 words is all it took you to describe the scene in such an apt fashion.
This is excellent.
an excellent haiku.. superb! ❤ it Priyanka!
Nicely composed.
Well, well, another haiku writer! Nice to meet you, dear! I wrote about something almost very similar, but more upon the lines of personification. Wanna see? It’s at http://thelunaticsdiary.blogspot.com
A deserted lamp – wonderful take on the prompt!
that was great loved reading it
i hate forgeting things
):)(:(
forgotten flames can be destructive
watch out!
Wonderfully written
Sweet!
Very nice. I hope the poor lamp is soon remembered and given oil.
Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/09/30/mag-34/
Nicely constructed with so few words …
I wish I could write so poignantly. Nice Mag. Love and Light, Sender
simple and very lovely…
True so cold and lonely looking.
QMM
moving..
Lovely haiku!
wow ! loved it !